Letter of the Month
Well what about a referral card? Here’s one originally written for an accountant. The accountant sent it out with his newsletter to all of his clients and you can imagine what happened?

Lots of his clients rang up and said “That’s disgusting! That’s totally unprofessional! That’s dreadful!”
No, not one of his clients rang up and said that!
Do you know what most clients rang up and said? It was something like this “You know Mr Accountant, I didn’t realise that you wanted referrals because, every time that I come to see you, you are always so--- busy.”
That’s the problem for so many people in business. We are so busy that we neither ask for referrals nor set up the circumstance where our existing clients, customers or patients feel happy about referring people to us.
So when they rang and said, “I didn’t know that you wanted referrals” he responded with “Well now I’d be happy if you did refer people to me.” “Oh we will,” they replied, “But, by the way, we don’t want the reward. We’d do it for nothing.”
He’d anticipated that he’d get that response and he had the answer ready. He simply said “When you refer someone to us it saves us on marketing expenses and we’re just sharing some of those savings with you. If you really don’t want to keep the reward you can donate it to a charity.”
Guess what he found? Charity begins at home! Most of the people kept the money anyway. They probably said to themselves, “That’s the first time I actually got money from an accountant!”
Two things about that referral card…
1. A 10% discount isn’t much of an incentive for someone to try that accountant’s services and in any event you should never ever discount. (But better to offer a discount then nothing!)
2. Similarly five dollars isn’t much of a reward for somebody who introduces a client who may spend $1000 or so for years and years. Imagine what might have been achieved if the accountant had promised a weekend for 2 at a plush hotel, a night out for dinner, tickets to the theatre or some reward of more value in relation to the lifetime value of a new client.
Nonetheless, here’s what you’ve got to know. It worked! In one year that referral card generated 407 new clients and over $400,000 worth of fees.
That’s far better than recruiting a new partner and has none of the hassles!
The printer’s referral letter
Okay if you didn’t like them apples how about these apples? This is a referral letter from a printer that I came across.
There it is, great letter isn’t it? Well it’s never going to work for you unless you mail it.
Now maybe you don’t want to use that letter or the first letter or the referral card word for word. But, what you can do is use them as templates to write something you are happy with. However, just one suggestion, don’t tamper with them too much.
Dear Fred!
Here’s free tickets for the movies
I need your help. Here’s what’s in it for you.
Two free tickets to the movies good at any movie theatre. Here’s what I want from you. Send me the name of someone you know somebody I might be able to help with their business printing problems. Friend, relative, business associate, co-worker, I don’t care as long as you think I might be able to serve them in some way.
I’m enclosing a referral card just fill it out and mail it back.
I’ll send you two tickets it’s that simple. As a bonus I am going to draw from the cards returned and treat some lucky person for dinner for two at The Ritz Restaurant.
What if they are not interested? No problem, I want to do business with people who want to do business with me. Let’s face it this isn’t New York. High pressure doesn’t work around here anyway.
And what if they buy something? They’ll get the highest level of quality and service at the most competitive price possible, just what you want for yourself.
Yours sincerely
P.S. Fred please respond quickly because I’ve mailed 150 of these letters to my best customers and I am only able to purchase 100 tickets as my budget is limited. I’ll draw the lucky winner of dinner for two at the end of the month. That’s another reason to reply promptly. |
Why?
Because they work!
The snooty stockbroker’s referral letter
Now here’s a letter I wrote umpteen years ago when I was Marketing Director of a stockbroker in the days when they dealt only with “blue bloods” and then by invitation only. I wanted to increase the client base so I came up with a letter that asked:
Good Morning,
Is there someone you know?
A recent rearrangement of my activities has created the opportunity for me to take care of several more clients.
Before I look elsewhere, I am writing to ask you if you have a friend or a colleague who might appreciate the same service and advice that I provide to you.
If so, I’d be delighted to hear from you so that we could make arrangements for me to meet them.
I look forward to your call shortly. If it’s more convenient I’ll call you if I haven’t heard from you in a few days.
Yours sincerely
P.S. By the way, there’s another very important piece of “hot news” that will blow you away that I must tell you when you call.
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In this case you’ll notice that I didn’t offer a tangible reward but rather a little piece of “hot news”. People love and value “hot tips” from a stockbroker.
Because the stockbroker for whom I wrote the letter really only dealt with
“upper crust” clients they didn’t want to upset them. They didn’t want the
letter to look cheap or “junk mail like”.
So it was written on very expensive handmade stationery enclosed in a matching envelope with an interesting stamp on it instead of being franked. The address was written in copperplate handwriting. It looked great--- almost like a letter from royalty! Perception is reality and the recipient’s reaction was determined not only by what the letter said but how and on what it was said.
Did it work? You’ve got to believe it.
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